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Powerful Nor'easter Pounds Northeast

Homes Evacuated, Hundreds of Flights Canceled

By KAREN MATTHEWS

AP

NEW YORK (April 16) - People were evacuated from flooded homes Monday and hundreds of thousands had no electricity as a fierce nor'easter drenched the Northeast with record rainfall.

Residents in at least one New York City neighborhood paddled through streets in boats. And in suburban Mamaroneck, Nicholas Staropoli said a truck near his home "actually floated up on the riverbank."

Rain was still falling Monday morning in the New York area and New England after it began early Sunday along the East Coast from Florida to New England. The National Guard was sent to help with rescue and evacuation efforts in the suburbs north of New York City.

Firefighters plucked Kathleen Reale and her twin boys from their window in suburban Mamaroneck using a front-end-loader. Water reached up to her knees in her garage and basement and her family was evacuated to a shelter.

"I mean everything will be ruined," she said Monday. "Everything will be gone. It's unbelievable."

The story continues for a few hundred more words. It states many facts including fatalities, rain totals and airport delays.

My Review:

Although there is a short quote in the second paragraph, the longer quote in the fifth paragraph is the intended first quote as it is more substantial and striking. Further, the fourth paragraph is devoted to setting-up this, the first quote. Karen Matthews’ story is about the devastation caused by a Nor-easter in the northeast, and it is important that the first quote reflects the effects of such devastation. Kathleen Reale’s quote effectively displays the dismay of those in the Nor’easter’s path as she is one of many who experienced the storm first-hand. Reale’s quote is full of emotion, stating “It’s unbelievable.” While she is not a public figure, Reale was an appropriate source for the first quote of this story. Rather than some governor exclaiming a “state of emergency” or “disaster area,” the author chose to capture the effects of the storm through those who experienced it directly and personally. There is space enough later on in the story to provide facts and politicians’ predictable responses.